Two mistakes not Made

rogersgeorge on July 17th, 2016

Lots of articles start sentences with adverbs when they should have adjectives, and too many people put “as” after adverbs such as “equally.” Here was a chance to make both errors, but the writers got it right!

Equally important, we must ensure that the knowledge we currently possess is not lost, or our discoveries will be of no use to our children and grandchildren.

This is from a recent email from ancient-origins.net, a site with a combination of good and flaky books and articles about ancient history.

Not-made mistake one: Starting the sentence with “Importantly.” No! No! Don’t start sentences with an adverb when you’re modifying (introducing) the whole sentence. This guy did it right. It’s important that we do this, but not in an important manner.

Not-made mistake two: Saying “equally as.”  The “as” isn’t necessary. Don’t use it!

Now, they did start this sentence with an adverb, but it modifies the adjective “important,” which you may do. Adverbs can modify adjectives, verbs, and other adverbs.

Subscribe to this blog's RSS feed

Nice adverb

rogersgeorge on May 3rd, 2012

Lots of people have trouble with the phrase “different from.” Commonly they write “different than.” So what’s the difference? Both forms have been used a lot (and in England they say “different to.” Gak.) Bartleby says “different from” is the only one that nobody says is wrong.  Rather like nobody doesn’t like Sara Lee. “Different from” functions as an adjective, though. You use it when you compare substantives (words that are like nouns, including nouns, pronouns, and gerunds).  So you can say, for example,

A husband’s method of doing something might be different from his wife’s method of doing the same thing.

But what if you’re comparing verbs? Then you need an adverb! The adverb is “differently. ”

I happen to be reading The Proper Care and Feeding of Husbands, by Dr. Laura Schlessinger. My wife and I are planning to read it together, but I got a little head start. (I hope there’s also a book about the proper care and feeding of wives, but to tell the truth, neither of us has much of a complaint about the other, but I digress.) The book has excellent English, some of the cleanest I have seen in a book in a while, and this morning I ran into the sentence that led to this post. Dr. Schlessinger does a nice job with “differently,” so I’m going to share it with you.

Wives need to remind themselves that when their husbands do something differently from how they would do it themselves, it does not constitute a breach of sanity or a display of contempt.

Note the correct use of “from.” Nice. You can tell what verbs are being compared, right?

Dr. S, posed differently from how I would expect. Yup, the pose is different from the usual one.

Ladies, (so far, anyway) I recommend the book as a source of some good ideas about how you might treat your hubby differently from how you might be treating him, and to everyone, I recommend the book for the good grammar.