A Good Example of Bad Writing

rogersgeorge on December 8th, 2021

The clue is at the top of the fourth panel.

As you know if you read this site much, you should avoid passive voice like the plague! (I almost wrote “Passive voice should be avoided.” Shame on me.) And using the third person makes it worse!

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Rogers George has been a technical writer for more than 20 years. He has written on subjects as diverse as outhouse assembly, restaurant reviews, software, information security, and scientific equipment. He has his own writing consultancy and is always happy to discuss writing and grammar. Drop him a line at curmudgeon@writing-rag.com.

A Good Example of Bad Writing

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