Another Badly Written Sentence
rogersgeorge on January 22nd, 2021
It’s almost a headline…
Fragments of rotating turbine parts penetrated one side of the plane’s fuselage before passing through to the other.
https://interestingengineering.com/massive-russian-an-124-condor-slides-off-the-runway-after-engine-failure
Interesting Engineering is a source I generally expect better writing from.
I mean, Duh! How else would the rotating parts pass through the other side???
Here’s a picture:
See if you can construct a better sentence.
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