Compose or comprise?
“Comprise” is a frequently misused word, a common accessory to the sin of pretentiousness. People want to sound high class, so they write “is comprised of” when they mean “is composed of” or even plain old “composes.”
I ran into an article in The New York Times online that presented them with a wonderful opportunity to be pretentious, and they didn’t take it! Hooray (for once) for The New York Times! here’s what they said, and it’s correct:
The project follows the successful effort by a group at the museum to replicate a far less complicated Babbage invention: the Difference Engine No. 2, a calculating machine composed of roughly 8,000 mechanical components assembled with a watchmaker’s precision.
The machine is composed of parts! Yesss!
Now that is a construction in the passive voice. What if they had wanted to use the active voice? Then they would have written:
The project follows the successful effort by a group at the museum to replicate a far less complicated Babbage invention: the Difference Engine No. 2, a calculating machine comprising roughly 8,000 mechanical components assembled with a watchmaker’s precision.
Now “comprise” is appropriate.
Never ever say “…is comprised of…” Ever! Unless you’re showing someone what not to do. Harrumpf.
Here’s a picture of the difference engine.
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