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		<title>Comment on Three things you should never say by Nellie Dee</title>
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		<dc:creator>Nellie Dee</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Wed, 09 May 2012 01:20:27 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>One more thing for me to worry about.  I&#039;m not sure I should keep reading The Writing Rag.  I have become paranoid enough.  :-)  Love you anyway.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>One more thing for me to worry about.  I&#8217;m not sure I should keep reading The Writing Rag.  I have become paranoid enough.  <img src='http://writing-rag.com/wp-includes/images/smilies/icon_smile.gif' alt=':-)' class='wp-smiley' />   Love you anyway.</p>
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		<title>Comment on Three things you should never say by S Hay</title>
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		<dc:creator>S Hay</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Tue, 08 May 2012 23:32:42 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>The other words you should never say/write are &#039;needless to say&#039;. If what you are saying/writing is needless, why are you saying/writing it?</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>The other words you should never say/write are &#8216;needless to say&#8217;. If what you are saying/writing is needless, why are you saying/writing it?</p>
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		<title>Comment on Birthday poem by Nellie Dee</title>
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		<dc:creator>Nellie Dee</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Thu, 03 May 2012 04:14:38 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Too fun.  I do hope you had a great dinner, Val.  I wished you a happy on FB, but was slow about getting to read your poems.  I love the shirt!</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Too fun.  I do hope you had a great dinner, Val.  I wished you a happy on FB, but was slow about getting to read your poems.  I love the shirt!</p>
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		<title>Comment on Birthday poem by Bob George (the brother)</title>
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		<dc:creator>Bob George (the brother)</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Fri, 27 Apr 2012 18:13:51 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Hey Reg, take her to that crab place on the water.  That place is worthy of a romantic birthday dinner.  Hmmm, and so is the Italian place.  Nah, crabs it is!

Happy birthday, Sis!

Bro Bob</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Hey Reg, take her to that crab place on the water.  That place is worthy of a romantic birthday dinner.  Hmmm, and so is the Italian place.  Nah, crabs it is!</p>
<p>Happy birthday, Sis!</p>
<p>Bro Bob</p>
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		<title>Comment on Birthday poem by Marilynne</title>
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		<dc:creator>Marilynne</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Fri, 27 Apr 2012 18:09:11 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Happy Birthday Val.  I think he means it.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Happy Birthday Val.  I think he means it.</p>
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		<title>Comment on Birthday poem by Bill Carlton</title>
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		<dc:creator>Bill Carlton</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Fri, 27 Apr 2012 17:08:35 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Happy Birthday Val, pick something delicious for dinner! Bro Bill</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Happy Birthday Val, pick something delicious for dinner! Bro Bill</p>
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		<title>Comment on Another who preaches my message by rogersgeorge</title>
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		<dc:creator>rogersgeorge</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Tue, 24 Apr 2012 10:06:22 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Coming up Friday. If you can&#039;t wait, search for &quot;poem&quot; in the upper right search box and you&#039;ll get a couple old ones.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Coming up Friday. If you can&#8217;t wait, search for &#8220;poem&#8221; in the upper right search box and you&#8217;ll get a couple old ones.</p>
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		<title>Comment on Another who preaches my message by Nellie Dee</title>
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		<dc:creator>Nellie Dee</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Tue, 24 Apr 2012 03:53:15 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Where&#039;s the poem for the birthday girl?</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Where&#8217;s the poem for the birthday girl?</p>
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		<title>Comment on And or or or and/or? by rogersgeorge</title>
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		<dc:creator>rogersgeorge</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Mon, 23 Apr 2012 20:51:11 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>I did, and I fixed it. Thank you! I remember copying and pasting to save myself some typing, then I let it slip my mind to change the conjunction. Funny how I can proofread something several times and still miss something like that.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>I did, and I fixed it. Thank you! I remember copying and pasting to save myself some typing, then I let it slip my mind to change the conjunction. Funny how I can proofread something several times and still miss something like that.</p>
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		<title>Comment on And or or or and/or? by Surazeus Simon Seamount</title>
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		<dc:creator>Surazeus Simon Seamount</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Mon, 23 Apr 2012 19:22:30 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>It appears the sentence from the book and your improvement version are exactly the same: 

There are two solutions to this problem: use less energy or find another source.

There are two solutions to this problem: use less energy or find another source.

Did you intend to type &quot;and&quot; instead of &quot;or&quot; in the &quot;better&quot; version?</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>It appears the sentence from the book and your improvement version are exactly the same: </p>
<p>There are two solutions to this problem: use less energy or find another source.</p>
<p>There are two solutions to this problem: use less energy or find another source.</p>
<p>Did you intend to type &#8220;and&#8221; instead of &#8220;or&#8221; in the &#8220;better&#8221; version?</p>
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		<title>Comment on Bad attraction by Surazeus Simon Seamount</title>
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		<dc:creator>Surazeus Simon Seamount</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Mon, 23 Apr 2012 19:15:31 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>analysis ... reveals</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>analysis &#8230; reveals</p>
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		<title>Comment on Verbing nouns by Nellie Dee</title>
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		<dc:creator>Nellie Dee</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Sat, 21 Apr 2012 20:09:54 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>K!</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>K!</p>
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		<title>Comment on Humor in the passive voice by Parsnip Accolades &#171; Rachel&#039;s Table</title>
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		<dc:creator>Parsnip Accolades &#171; Rachel&#039;s Table</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Sat, 14 Apr 2012 01:08:39 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>[...] I am honored and amused by this accolade. Honored because Rogers said my grammar was nearly perfect; except for a missing comma and one tense he would have changed. Amused because tenses are the bane of my existence (that&#8217;s dramatic, but you get the idea). There are times I change an entire post&#8217;s tense, only to change it back (I just changed the tense of this sentence, in fact). Passive verb tenses get me every time. That&#8217;s why I&#8217;ll be studying up on them via The Writing Rag. [...]</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>[...] I am honored and amused by this accolade. Honored because Rogers said my grammar was nearly perfect; except for a missing comma and one tense he would have changed. Amused because tenses are the bane of my existence (that&#8217;s dramatic, but you get the idea). There are times I change an entire post&#8217;s tense, only to change it back (I just changed the tense of this sentence, in fact). Passive verb tenses get me every time. That&#8217;s why I&#8217;ll be studying up on them via The Writing Rag. [...]</p>
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