Another Redundancy

rogersgeorge on July 4th, 2020

I preach against needless repetition in writing, called redundancy. You can find some of my other redundancy posts using the search box in the upper right corner. Here’s another. I think the speaker had a psychological reason for using it; maybe that’s okay. For speaking, anyway.

“The Greenland canyon we only know about through radar that can see through three kilometers of solid ice.”

https://www.atlasobscura.com/articles/greenland-ancient-grand-canyon

Ice is always solid, so “solid” is unnecessary (meaning redundant). In fact, in writing, I think the sentence has a little more punch if you leave the “solid” out. What do you think?

Almost forgot. Here’s a picture:

Deep below the flat swath of ice, there’s a lot going on, geologically, at least. SILVAN LEINSS / CC BY-SA 4.0

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